Reagen-Lionel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon: Fated Encounter]

Tyranitar is that BUSINESS!
Lucario wasnt bad either. But Tyranitar was all up in that shit when it mattered most.

Tyrant-D responds:

Tyranitar WRECKED! LIKA BOSS!!

[Mystic Quest episode 1]

pretty cool fpr your first one.

Like somene said before me, give some time to read the text.
And it seem kinda fuzzy. Can you make the actual sprites clearer at least. The background wouldnt really matter as long as you can see the asprites clearer. They kinda blend in with the background too much.

Just some tips.

CubePanda responds:

thanks dude, thing is though on flash 8 on the thing they look normal, when you publish it they go purple -.-

[Link's Adventure- Part 1]

probably submitted this too early

You should had at least did a bit more before submitting this. nothing really happens in it. And kind of makes people lose intrest in it and really won't care for the next one.
you say he was going to end up in Mario world. could had at least ended it with him being there. that would make people what to know what is going to happen next. other wise this was quite boring.

Coolbrow responds:

Thanks i never thought of that I probably should have have ended like that. it would of been like a cliff-hanger. Thanks for the advice i will use that to my advantage in the future.

-Coolbrow