The meat
The meat of the song. 0:27- 0:40. Improve upon it right there. should had kept that going and then start dishing out the good stuff and got it pumping.
That right there is the good meat right there. Its what can make or break the song.
Add some bass in there, probably a good snare and kick it up. To give it that hard thump.
If you do that, i beg you. PLEASE PM ME telling me you did it. I want to hear it.
After about 0:40 when it started to get back soft. After when it picked up at 0:27 i kind of just fast forwarded to 1:57 where it kicked back in. 0:27 got me excited and got me pumped up, after it softened back down i wanted to keep that pumped up feeling. So thats why i fast forwarded.
Im giving it a 4 just because of the potential it has. Its like a sandwich, its got the meat and the bread afew toppings, spice it up a bit more. Make that sandwich a spicy hot good ass sandwhich with a kick.